Hasan you have made a decent start here with some quite detailed analysis of camera and of mise en scene. At times you are rather descriptive / listy- ensure you always identify the meanings / connotations. I would like to see you incorporating the comparisons with case studies into the main analysis, rather than in three separate slides. You also need to add some more theory points, and complete the analysis of editing. Well done so far! Vanessa
Hasan you have made a decent start here with some quite detailed analysis of camera and of mise en scene. At times you are rather descriptive / listy- ensure you always identify the meanings / connotations. I would like to see you incorporating the comparisons with case studies into the main analysis, rather than in three separate slides. You also need to add some more theory points, and complete the analysis of editing. Well done so far! Vanessa
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